Fiction short story
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| "The soul who stole my heart" |
There was a girl named Victoria. She's smart and pretty. She's also lovely, friendly and she really loves to go to school. Once in her life she meet a boy who became her best buddy, but that boy breaks her heart into pieces.
Monday morning, while Victoria was walking in the hallway, she saw a boy. She approached and asked that boy.
"Hi, I'm Victoria, what's your name?"
"Oh hi, I'm Franco Vallejo" the boy responsed
"Are you a freshmen?" Victoria added
"Ah, yeah" Franco reply and then smiled.
Victoria smile back to Franco.
(*The bells ring)
"I have to go nor Franco, nice meeting you, see you around"
"Bye see you" Franco responsed and then Victoria quickly run back to her classroom.
After her 1st class, Victoria go to the cafeteria to buy some foods and she saw Franco there sitting alone. After buying some foods, she go to Franco and approach him.
"Hi, you are Franco right?, the boy I saw earlier?" Victoria asked with a big smile.
"Yes, hi Victoria" Franco responsed
"Can I set here and join you?" Victoria added
"Yeah sure" Franco reply.
They eat together and they have so many chit chat. After how many minutes, Victoria go back to her classroom because she has a class. After her class Victoria decided to look for Franco but she cannot find him. After her third and last class Victoria pack her things and then go home. While doing her assignment she cannot be erased those lovely eyes of Franco and how handsome he is and she's hoping that tomorrow she will see Franco again, have lunch and have chit chat with him.
After how many days, Victoria and Franco became best friend.
Friday morning Victoria wake up so early. She is so excited to go to school. She's happy but sad at the same time because it's friday tomorrow is saturday, there's no class and on Monday November 1 it's holiday because it's Souls day she cannot be able to see Franco. After preparing, she go to school with a happy heart. While walking, she kept on looking for Franco but Franco was not around. Victoria feels so sad. After her first class, she go to the cafeteria but Franco was not there. Her second and third class was already done but still Franco was not around. She go home feeling so sad and keep on minding where Franco is. She's so worried to Franco. She's sad because in that day she's planning to tell Franco what she felt towards Franco.
It's monday, november 1 and its souls day. It's holiday that's why Victoria's family decided to go to the cemetery to visit her grandpa. They bring candles, foods and flowers. They clean the grave of her grandpa. After cleaning, Victoria decided to walk around. While walking, she saw a girl. She approach that girl.
"Hi, I'm Victoria, what's your name?"
"Hello, I am Jane Vallejo" the girl responsed
"Ah wait, Jane Vallejo?" Victoria asked with curious voice
"Yes, I am Jane Vallejo, why?" the girl reply
"Oh nothing" Victoria said
Victoria asked Jane if she's with her family.
"No, my parents are busy, they cannot go here to visit my brother" Jane responsed
"What, Brother? What his name?" Victoria asked because she's so curious
"Yeah, my brother, his name is Franco Vallejo" Jane reply.
Victoria was so shocked after hearing what Jane said. Victoria became more curious.
"He was killed last year in School. He has been stabbed a thousand times" Jane said while some tears falling from her eyes
"My brother was so lovely as lovey as flower" Jane added.
Victoria cannot believe what Jane said. After hearing those words Victoria started to cry and then quickly go to school hoping that Franco was still there. she walk around the campus, while walking she saw Franco sitting in the stairs. Victoria immediately go to Franco and asked him.
(At the School)
"Hi, it's souls day, why are you here?" Victoria asked with shaking voice, but Franco did not response, so Victoria confronted him.
"I know your dead" Victoria said that makes Franco freeze.
"You were stabbed and killed last year here in School" Victoria added, but still Franco did not say anything, he just Cry. Because of heavy heart, Victoria cannot control her emotions. She asked Franco again while crying. "Why you didn't tell me the truth? I thought were friends?" Victoria already asked Franco a million times but Still Franco didn't tell anything.
"Now I know why you have that skin color. Now I know why sometime I saw you holding your stomach ang you look like in pain. Now I know why my friends and classmates laughed at me everytime I'm talking to you. Now I know why I heard a lot of gossip that I was being crazy everytime I'm with you. Now I know!" Victoria shouted.
Victoria sit and continue to cry. After franco her those words from Victoria, he finally revealed the truth, the truth that will breaks Victoria's heart.
"Yes I'm dead" Franco said
"I was stabbed and killed last year here at school" Franco added with a nervous voice
"I'm just waiting for someone who can see me, and that's you Victoria. This is my last mission here to finally go to the final destination" Franco said
"Are you now scared with me?" Franco asked Victoria
"No, I'm not scared, I'm hurt" Victoria response while crying
"Can you stay here, please stay with me" Victoria added
"No Victoria, I can't stay here" Franco reply
"I'm so sorry for hiding you the truth. Your kind Victoria. Thankyou for helping me with my mission and thankyouu for the friendship we build. I'm gonna treasured all those Precious memories with you" Franco said while crying
"Please Franco stay here" Victoria said
"No, I can't" Franco reply
"I need to go now, bye Victoria, see you next life" Franco added while gradually disappearing.
Victoria's heart breaks into pieces and she feel like the universe was in her shoulder. She cannot believe that these things happened in her life."
How I wish it was a dream" Victoria said while crying
"How I wish I have told him what I felt towards him and how special he is in my heart" Victoria added.
After how many minutes Victoria decided to go home bringing the most heartbreaking reality that in the next days, months and years she cannot be able to be with Franco anymore. Every night she's crying and hoping that one day she and her best buddy, Franco will meet again.

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